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Post by Legi on Mar 2, 2008 15:48:28 GMT -5
Tell me what you think if it gets good reviews i'll do more . A pale ginger she-cat with a swollen tummy. She was a ThunderClan she-cat. She was a worrier called Sandstorm she was soon to kitten. She sat in the nursery near Cinderpelt den the medical cat. A handsome ginger tom enter the room called Firestar. He bent down and nuzzled Sandstorm. He smiled “I have to go and hunt now” he said quality. He pounded out of the camp as he wasn’t to get back soon. At sun down he had came back and added his catch to the fresh-kill hill. He kept to fat rats in his month and totted over to Sandstorm. He gasped as he found that Sandstorm had kittened. To a small cute she-cat and he dropped a one of the rats near her face. He ate his kill and smiled at her. * * * * 2 Moons had past since the kit was born. He and Sandstorm with the kit in her jaws made there way to high rock. Firestar yowled for a name calling. He heard quite paw stapes towards the high rock. He smiled “This kit is two moons old she is has come the age were we name her” He said and heard every one whispering. He continued “I Firestar name this kit to become Smokepaw with StarClan help I hope you live to be a strong she-cat, So I will mentor this kit after 6 moons” he account. “Whitestorm, Darkstripe and Runningwind will be on hunting for us to day good luck you should do well as it is new leaf”.
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Post by ~>NalaTashi<~ on Mar 3, 2008 17:25:00 GMT -5
I like it! more plz lol
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Post by Legi on Mar 4, 2008 11:34:11 GMT -5
Chapter One
It had been half a moon since name calling. So Smokekit a ginger fur leaped out of the nursery and ran to Firestar. “Dad lets go hunt” she nagged at her dad. Firestar smiled at the kit “your not older the 6 moons you cant” he said turning on his side to face the young kit, “also in greeting me name time call me Firestar.”. The little kit nodded and bounded out looking a bit upset. She sighed and looked at sun rise. She looked at the entrance to the camp she watched night patrol come back and drown patrol going out. She smiled as she though about hunting. She smelt the fresh-kill hill and mouth start to water shed never tried fresh-kill before. She changed out of the camp with her mum and one other kit the Sandstorm had kitten two. His name was Ashkit the start to lap up the water with smokekit by his side. They moved back towards came to find. Blood splatter everywhere and tuffs of fur dotted around clamp. Smokekits month dropped but Firestar came out limping not much. Firestar smiled at Smokekit “go get your first bit of fresh-kill“ he announced. Smokekit nodded and then lowered her head. She lifted again and ran to the fresh kill hill. She took a vole off of it. She want to a tree and begin to eat. Firestar looked at Sandstorm with a smiled. But Sandstorm did not have such the same look as he did “Firestar have you lost one of your lives” she asked with worry in her voice. Firestar shook his head “no my love not just yet”.
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Post by ~>NalaTashi<~ on Mar 4, 2008 11:41:58 GMT -5
lol, I will be here every time you post a chapter, I am hooked on Warriors ;D keep em comin
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Post by Legi on Mar 4, 2008 11:45:28 GMT -5
Lol me 2 but i am only on the 3rd one
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Kalia
Infant Cub
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Post by Kalia on Apr 11, 2008 18:48:51 GMT -5
I love Warriors!!
Keep on writing!!
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